POEMBRACE MYSELF!!

by Guest Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:16 pm

THE CURE

HERES MY STORY AND NOT MY EXCUSE
I DO NOT DESIRE PITY NOR DO I DWELL ON THE PAST
MY WOMB HAS BEEN BLESSED FOR MY 1ST BORN IS A MAN
BROUGHT INTO THIS WORLD IRONICALLY WITHOUT PAIN
MY LIFE CURSED BY MEN
FATHERS ALIKE FOR ITs a sickness and it SEEMS I AM THEIR CURE
YES, I NOW CONSIDER MYSELF THEIR CURE
A PILL PERHAPS...SLOWLY DISSOLVING
BROKEN INTO PIECES WHILE INSURMOUNTABLE PORTIONS ARE BEING TAKEN; STOLEN!
SOME HAVE HAD MORE THAN THEIR FAIR SHARE
BUT IN THE EVENT OF MY DEMISE
I WILL BE POISON TO THEIR THOUGHTS
EATING AT EACH CONSCIENCE
SO I HAVE HIDDEN A SMALL PIECE OF MYSELF FOR U
FOR U A MAN, MY MAN, MY CHILD
AND I AM YOUR CURE.

BY LATOYA WALKER

by **H4CK3R** Sun Feb 24, 2008 10:06 pm

It propa still, sound like a professional ting, yuh nd fi tek it 2 a prof. level. Sound a like a real english student to

by **dBosS** Mon Feb 25, 2008 12:55 am

mad!!! good work, good word..... cheers

its true seem professional..... I encourage you to continue..*big man ting*....I love it POEMBRACE MYSELF!! 9764

by **djvenom** Mon Feb 25, 2008 8:18 pm

it mad, creativewith style

by djbobo/aka camar Mon Feb 25, 2008 10:43 pm

TOYA wrote:THE CURE

HERES MY STORY AND NOT MY EXCUSE
I DO NOT DESIRE PITY NOR DO I DWELL ON THE PAST
MY WOMB HAS BEEN BLESSED FOR MY 1ST BORN IS A MAN
BROUGHT INTO THIS WORLD IRONICALLY WITHOUT PAIN
MY LIFE CURSED BY MEN
FATHERS ALIKE FOR ITs a sickness and it SEEMS I AM THEIR CURE
YES, I NOW CONSIDER MYSELF THEIR CURE
A PILL PERHAPS...SLOWLY DISSOLVING
BROKEN INTO PIECES WHILE INSURMOUNTABLE PORTIONS ARE BEING TAKEN; STOLEN!
SOME HAVE HAD MORE THAN THEIR FAIR SHARE
BUT IN THE EVENT OF MY DEMISE
I WILL BE POISON TO THEIR THOUGHTS
EATING AT EACH CONSCIENCE
SO I HAVE HIDDEN A SMALL PIECE OF MYSELF FOR U
FOR U A MAN, MY MAN, MY CHILD
AND I AM YOUR CURE.

BY LATOYA WALKER

yea this sounds realy nice hun keep it up