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Post by Guest on Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:16 pm

THE CURE


HERES MY STORY AND NOT MY EXCUSE
I DO NOT DESIRE PITY NOR DO I DWELL ON THE PAST
MY WOMB HAS BEEN BLESSED FOR MY 1ST BORN IS A MAN
BROUGHT INTO THIS WORLD IRONICALLY WITHOUT PAIN
MY LIFE CURSED BY MEN
FATHERS ALIKE FOR ITs a sickness and it SEEMS I AM THEIR CURE
YES, I NOW CONSIDER MYSELF THEIR CURE
A PILL PERHAPS...SLOWLY DISSOLVING
BROKEN INTO PIECES WHILE INSURMOUNTABLE PORTIONS ARE BEING TAKEN; STOLEN!
SOME HAVE HAD MORE THAN THEIR FAIR SHARE
BUT IN THE EVENT OF MY DEMISE
I WILL BE POISON TO THEIR THOUGHTS
EATING AT EACH CONSCIENCE
SO I HAVE HIDDEN A SMALL PIECE OF MYSELF FOR U
FOR U A MAN, MY MAN, MY CHILD
AND I AM YOUR CURE.

BY LATOYA WALKER

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Post by H4CK3R on Sun Feb 24, 2008 10:06 pm

It propa still, sound like a professional ting, yuh nd fi tek it 2 a prof. level. Sound a like a real english student to
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Post by dBosS on Mon Feb 25, 2008 12:55 am

mad!!! good work, good word..... cheers its true seem professional..... I encourage you to continue..*big man ting*....I love it

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Post by djvenom on Mon Feb 25, 2008 8:18 pm

it mad, creativewith style
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Post by djbobo/aka camar on Mon Feb 25, 2008 10:43 pm

TOYA wrote:THE CURE


HERES MY STORY AND NOT MY EXCUSE
I DO NOT DESIRE PITY NOR DO I DWELL ON THE PAST
MY WOMB HAS BEEN BLESSED FOR MY 1ST BORN IS A MAN
BROUGHT INTO THIS WORLD IRONICALLY WITHOUT PAIN
MY LIFE CURSED BY MEN
FATHERS ALIKE FOR ITs a sickness and it SEEMS I AM THEIR CURE
YES, I NOW CONSIDER MYSELF THEIR CURE
A PILL PERHAPS...SLOWLY DISSOLVING
BROKEN INTO PIECES WHILE INSURMOUNTABLE PORTIONS ARE BEING TAKEN; STOLEN!
SOME HAVE HAD MORE THAN THEIR FAIR SHARE
BUT IN THE EVENT OF MY DEMISE
I WILL BE POISON TO THEIR THOUGHTS
EATING AT EACH CONSCIENCE
SO I HAVE HIDDEN A SMALL PIECE OF MYSELF FOR U
FOR U A MAN, MY MAN, MY CHILD
AND I AM YOUR CURE.

BY LATOYA WALKER
yea this sounds realy nice hun keep it up
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Post by HotSteppa on Mon Feb 25, 2008 11:05 pm

props given where props are due ... grl yuh poem sell off ... totally ....

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Post by Ms. Kitty on Tue Feb 26, 2008 7:46 pm

ye i definately like this one
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Post by Guest on Tue Feb 26, 2008 10:31 pm

thanks to every1 for their comments...really appreciate them

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Post by STATIcK on Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:37 am

real deep, its good. Real deep

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Post by STATIcK on Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:37 am

I'm thinking about writing something too, you inspired me for something.

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