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Post by Mz_U on Mon Feb 25, 2008 4:41 am

Pause, break
If only for my sake
Turn around and walk don't you dare look back
cause IТm still wheeling from your last attack
What, wait
You say this is fate
You think you're all that and you're mighty fine
You think that ill die if I donТt make you all mine
Slowly unwind
IТve made up my mind
That thing in my chest well it aint got no feeling
cause from then till now believe me IТm still healing
So I get colder as I grow older
with each vile encounter do I get bolder
Cause IТve been there before
But no more no more


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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 25, 2008 2:29 pm

this is deep...nice...keep it up hun

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Post by HotSteppa on Mon Feb 25, 2008 11:03 pm

Love this poem .... Grl this is really deep

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Post by Mz_U on Tue Feb 26, 2008 1:23 am

Thankx much ... one of my favs too .. got others I'll add later

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Post by dBosS on Tue Feb 26, 2008 1:24 am

mad!! jus creative i tell ya...hurry up a write a next

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Post by djvenom on Tue Feb 26, 2008 1:02 pm

good stuff , looks like we have a lot a writers here cheers afro
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Post by Ms. Kitty on Tue Feb 26, 2008 7:44 pm

not bad ^_^
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Post by STATIcK on Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:40 am

wow, its like real wide, it could mean so many things but all these things point to one. real great, really good

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Post by STATIcK on Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:41 am

this type of writing is really interesting, ill keep it in mind

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Post by Mz_U on Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:41 am

THANKS HON .... IM HUNGRYYYYY

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