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Mesmerized
by blacknite on Mon Oct 20, 2008 3:29 pm
Captivating flaws,
Even imperfections,
Somehow seem to draw,
My quiet affections.
You deeply gaze,
With a hidden intention,
My unbreakable crave
To draw your attention.
Your every move,
The words you speak,
Undeniably prove
That I am but weak.
The smile you contrive,
Vastly from your soul,
Makes mine own come alive,
To perfection, a whole.
The heartfelt symphony,
Of a sweet song of life,
The fact of always being,
Mesmerized by your eyes.
Even imperfections,
Somehow seem to draw,
My quiet affections.
You deeply gaze,
With a hidden intention,
My unbreakable crave
To draw your attention.
Your every move,
The words you speak,
Undeniably prove
That I am but weak.
The smile you contrive,
Vastly from your soul,
Makes mine own come alive,
To perfection, a whole.
The heartfelt symphony,
Of a sweet song of life,
The fact of always being,
Mesmerized by your eyes.
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Re: Mesmerized
by Naughty on Mon Oct 20, 2008 4:16 pm
Hmmmm, u wrote this one?
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Re: Mesmerized
by Naughty on Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:01 pm
Kool,
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Re: Mesmerized
by Mz_U on Fri Oct 24, 2008 2:53 am
sexxyy ... lol ok i know tha doesnt adequately describe a poem but sexxxi is good :D yea Me likey it mucho mucho
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